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3D Render Scene: Computer Room by VenomEXsoldier 3D Render Scene: Computer Room by VenomEXsoldier
A Group Project we did at school, every had a model to do and I light the scene in it. I did the computers on the front left

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I was browsing through many works to critique and I found this piece seemingly standing out. As for someone who is studying 3D design and animation, I took consider of both composition and lighting since these things shape out the best work from all of us. What I especially, especially love about this work and the first thing I've noticed is the lighting. I love how the 'blue' light in this work simply touches every corner of the piece and how intense it looks from the viewer's perspective. The computers at the side are excellent because they radiate more light and depicts futurism and technology driven atmosphere which allows this work to tell a story independently. It didn't need words to storytell. The elements in this piece are quite supportive as well--for an instance, the boxes on the side and the complexity of both the wall and ceiling. I love it, especially the lighting. Keep up with your techniques in lighting and I suggest you to study more with it because you definitely have the potential. On the other side, work more on your textures. The only strange thing I've noticed is the wall on the right because it looks plain and it didn't depict heavy texture. But seriously, let's not dwell on that--I seriously just enjoyed your work. :)

Happy going and keep it up! :)
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Sunnahir Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016
i wish my room was like that want more biger nice job you n group have done venom 
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VenomEXsoldier Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Hey Thanks! :D Been a while since we talk! Hows it going?
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Sunnahir Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016
yw . been busy with work n class i have noo lifee waah  but is normal i be doing good but busy.
how are u doing veenoo .
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VenomEXsoldier Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Been studying animation XP hoping to get a job in the summer in a  studio so will see what happens!
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Sunnahir Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2016
aah animation that good filde i can see ur hard workn study will pay off soon 
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JoTehDemonicPickle Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Student Filmographer
The final product turned out awesome, I love the lighting! Good job, Jon! :la:
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VenomEXsoldier Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thanks Jo :D
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Pyroraptor42 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
wow that's very realistic!
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VenomEXsoldier Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! ^^
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Pyroraptor42 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015
what program?
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VenomEXsoldier Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Maya 2016
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Pyroraptor42 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015
I think next year I will learn 3D Max :)
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kingdragon01 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
Cool looking place!
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VenomEXsoldier Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :D
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kingdragon01 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015
Your welcome:)
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TheJollyStNick Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really cool. What software was used to make it?
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VenomEXsoldier Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Maya 2016
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